一小圈很铁的朋友
主创说他们年轻时也有一小圈关系特别铁的朋友。
We had a tight circle of friends.Friends: The Reunion · 2021 — 第 4 / 25 章 · 3'08" · B1
几位主创一上来就自报家门,把这部剧的来历讲得特别清楚:一群朋友 trying to make a living and find love(一边谋生,一边找爱),没有主角,讲的就是这帮人。一句话卖点:it's about that time in your life when your friends are your family(它讲的是朋友就是家人的那一段人生)。想学聊创作、聊友情的常用说法,这段值得听。
几位主创在重聚特辑里先自我介绍,再讲这部剧是怎么来的:他们有一圈很铁的朋友,We had a tight circle of friends.(我们有一小圈很铁的朋友。),想拍的就是一群人在人生里 trying to make a living and find love(一边谋生,一边找爱)。他们坚持不设主角,因为 it's just about the friends(讲的就是这帮朋友);一句话卖点则说 it's about that time in your life when your friends are your family(它讲的是朋友就是家人的那一段人生)。后来大家走进旧摄影棚,看着当年的椅子和梁,说 And then we had a blast.(后来我们玩得超级嗨。)。想学讲创作、讲友情的表达,这段很合适。
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that time in your lifehad a blasta tight circle of friendsmake a living
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人生中的那一段时期
主创用一句话介绍这部剧,说它讲的是人生中朋友就是家人的那一段。
That time in your life when everything feels new is short.人生里一切都新鲜的阶段其实很短。
玩得特别尽兴
一小圈很铁的朋友
谋生;靠……过日子
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一小圈很铁的朋友
主创说他们年轻时也有一小圈关系特别铁的朋友。
We had a tight circle of friends.谋生;靠……过日子
主创描述这部剧的起点:一群年轻人一边努力谋生,一边寻找爱情,用 make a living 概括他们最日常的挣扎。
trying to make a living and find love.找到爱情
trying to make a living and find love.现在分词短语:trying to 用现在分词补充说明当时的状态,一边谋生一边找爱,和主句的人物并列。分词能让句子省掉重复的主语和连词。
trying to make a living and find love.make 的 k 滑向 a,成 ma-ka;living 的 ng 轻收不拖。
trying to make a living and find love.从……取材;借鉴
-We drew on relatives of ours and friends of ours and names were --用某人的名字命名
We named Chandler after a friend of mine.从……里取材
I mean, we definitely pulled from our lives.对某事很着迷
-We really were intrigued with the idea of doing a true ensemble.感觉像是
which we felt like we hadn't seen before.非限制性定语从句:which 指代前面的整件事,补充一句我们当时觉得前所未见。加上逗号就成了补充说明,而不是限定。
which we felt like we hadn't seen before.人生中的那一段时期
主创用一句话介绍这部剧,说它讲的是人生中朋友就是家人的那一段。
The one-sentence pitch is it's about that time in your life when your friends are your family.一句话卖点
The one-sentence pitch is it's about that time in your life when your friends are your family.关系副词从句:when 引导从句,给前面的 that time 补上是哪一段日子,主句就是朋友即家人的那些年。它让抽象的人生阶段一下落到具体情境里。
The one-sentence pitch is it's about that time in your life when your friends are your family.time 的 m 接上 in,成 ti-min;your life 之间的 j 音可轻轻带出。
The one-sentence pitch is it's about that time in your life when your friends are your family.一下子闪回
-Memories just flashed back蠢事
Just, like, stupid things that you would do.那时候
But back then, we had three per camera.那时候——口语回顾过去,比 at that time 更随意;正式书面里少用。
But back then, we had three per camera.在路上;快到了
-Pizza's on the way.起身;站起来
I told you we wouldn't have to get up.来找我
-But you remember the beginning of the week after the table draft, you came to me and you go,to 弱化成 /tə/,came 的 m 收住后三拍走完。
-But you remember the beginning of the week after the table draft, you came to me and you go,拿它玩出花来
And you were like, "Maybe we can have fun with this."玩得特别尽兴
主创回忆当年把一个看似很蠢的点子玩开之后,大家玩得特别尽兴。
And then we had a blast.had a 的 d 弹成美式 flap,听成 ha-da blast。
And then we had a blast.玩得超嗨——口语说玩得很尽兴;正式场合可改说非常愉快。
And then we had a blast.撒尿;上厕所——口语词,朋友之间可用,正式场合宜改说去洗手间。
-What if we have to pee?失手;搞砸
-Schwimmer, the episode where you guys were throwing a ball and the whole time, you couldn't drop the ball.自始至终;全程
-Schwimmer, the episode where you guys were throwing a ball and the whole time, you couldn't drop the ball.来来回回
Hey, guys. Hey, do you remember the one where you guys were throwing a ball back and forthThe one-sentence pitch is it's about that time in your life when your friends are your family.一句话卖点就是:它讲的是人生中朋友就是家人的那一段。 把整部剧的主题压进一个 when 从句:朋友就是家人的那几年,一句话立住作品。
It's not like there's a lead and they have friends.不是有个主角,然后他再有一帮朋友。 用 not like 先否定掉行业里最常见的主角套路,反问式的干脆很有立场。
No, it's just about the friends.不,讲的就是这帮朋友。 用 No 先断掉套路,再一句 it's just about the friends 把主题钉死,干脆有力。
We had a tight circle of friends.我们有一小圈很铁的朋友。 tight 一个词把友情的浓度写出来,circle 又画出边界,短句既是回忆也是起点。
And then we had a blast.后来我们玩得超级嗨。 And then 承接前文的转折,had a blast 把结果说得又短又痛快。
意思是「玩得特别尽兴」。And then we had a blast 就是「后来我们玩得超级嗨」,说一次活动很开心时特别常用。
意思是「谋生、靠……过日子」。trying to make a living and find love 就是「一边谋生,一边找爱」。
意思是「一小圈很铁的朋友」。tight 在这里指关系紧密,circle of friends 就是朋友圈子。
that time in your life。It's about that time in your life when your friends are your family 就是「它讲的是朋友就是家人的那一段人生」。
have a blast,过去式是 had a blast。We had a blast 就是「我们玩得特别尽兴」。
下一章 · 第 5 章pet peeve重聚玩角色问答
第 1 章get in the way重回片场追忆往事
第 2 章in the bag老友重聚登台话当年
第 3 章stay in touch喷泉前六人重聚
正在看 · 第 4 章that time in your life主创讲述创作初衷
第 5 章pet peeve重聚玩角色问答
第 6 章has this magic问答游戏揭晓神秘声音
第 7 章at the top of their game重聚回看水母那集
第 8 章down to the wire重聚聊当年选角
第 9 章to make a long story short回忆试镜的糗事
第 10 章in the wrong hands主创回忆当年选角
第 11 章tail between my legs求制片放他换剧
第 12 章a completely different ballgame没人教你成名是什么样
第 13 章had a big hand in全球粉丝讲述剧集影响
第 14 章got you hooked聊入坑与现场提问
第 15 章down-to-earth猴子总害得剧组重拍
第 16 章cost a fortune聊室内戏拍到脱臼
第 17 章put our heads together把受伤写进剧本
第 18 章beat you to it观众反应改写剧情
第 19 章take something for a spin重演名场面唱臭臭猫
第 20 章buy a word of it抬沙发卡在楼梯上
第 21 章keep straight a face重看拍摄笑场花絮
第 22 章calls out to me聊笑声和招牌角色
第 23 章two ships passing自曝第一季互相暗恋
第 24 章the long arm of the law聊当年暗恋与客串
第 25 章go to pieces聊大结局怎么收尾