這場戲：躺著口述安魂曲
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莫札特病著，薩列里還是上門，留下一句 Give him this（把這個給他），又把催稿話帶到：明晚寫完，再付一百杜卡特。莫札特嫌 It's too soon（太快了），還說自己 I feel wrong being here（待在這兒覺得不對勁）。他躺下口述《安魂曲》，一句一句問 Do you have me?（你跟上了嗎）。想學怎麼探病、催人、口述，很實用。
他把那句譯成 Consigned to flames of woe（被投入苦難的火焰）
Consigned to flames of woe 被投入苦難的火焰believe in 相信……存在、認同never dies 永不熄滅
❝ 獨白 · 4 句 他說 Do you have me? Show me（記住了嗎？彈給我看）
Start with 從……開始Second beat 第二拍Show me 做給我看、給我看看
莫札特病倒了。薩列里登門探望，康斯坦茨回一句 Better not（最好別進來），但他還是把錢留下：Give him this. That's his share（把這個給他，這是他那一份），並轉達委託人的話——明晚之前寫完，再付 another hundred ducats（一百杜卡特）。莫札特卻覺得 It's too soon（太快了），說自己 I feel wrong being here（待在這兒覺得不對勁），執意回維也納。他躺下，開始口述《安魂曲》的下一段：How would you translate that?（這句你怎麼譯？）被譯成 Consigned to flames of woe（被投入苦難的火焰），他追問 Do you believe in it?（你信這個嗎），還說 A fire which never dies, burning you forever（一團永不熄滅的火，永遠燒著你）。想學探病、轉達委託、口述的英語，這些說法很實用。
A1–C2 是歐標等級。點一個等級後，比它高的卡片會變淡，播放到那裡不會自動暫停。
“I feel wrong being here.”
我待在這兒，覺得不對勁。
把說不清的愧疚壓進 wrong 一詞，短句反而最重。
feel wrong being (somewhere)
在某個場合莫名不安、覺得不該出現時用；語氣沉，偏書面。
I feel off being here. ／ Something about this place feels wrong.
literary
wrong 重讀，being here 輕輕連過。
I feel wrong standing here while they argue. 他們吵架時我站在這兒，覺得不對勁。
“A fire which never dies,burning you forever.”
一團永不熄滅的火，永遠燒著你。
定語從句接分詞，把地獄寫成一幅緩慢燃燒的畫面。
a (thing) which never dies
形容甩不掉、持續折磨的東西時用；適合寫作或演講。
a fire that never goes out ／ a flame that keeps burning
literary
never dies 稍頓，burning 起句放慢。
It is a memory which never dies, burning him forever. 那是一段永不消散的記憶，永遠燒著他。
“...he will pay you another hundred ducats.”
他會再付你一百個杜卡特金幣。
把期限和報酬一起壓上桌，錢越具體，威脅越沉。
he will pay you another (amount).
談條件、下最後通牒時把報酬或代價說具體；對合作方用，語氣公事公辦。
They'll pay you another thousand. ／ There's another bonus if you finish early.
中性
another hundred 連讀，ducats 重讀。
Finish tonight and they will pay you another thousand. 今晚做完，他們會再付你一千。
“Do you have me? Show me.”
你跟上了嗎？做給我看。
口述記譜裡的兩句短問，把師生般的緊張與信任說盡。
Do you have me? Show me.
教人、帶人做事時，確認對方是否跟上並當場演示。
Are you with me? Show me. ／ Do you follow? Walk me through it.
口語
Do you 弱讀，Show me 收得乾脆。
Do you have me on this one? Now show me. 這一段你跟上了嗎？現在做給我看。
“That's too soon. Tomorrow night...”
太快了。明天晚上……
把不可能說完就斷在半句，猶豫和為難全在省略號裡。
That's too soon.
拒絕過緊的期限、覺得來不及開口時用；對上司或合作方也說得出口。
That's not enough time. ／ Tomorrow is far too soon.
中性
too soon 連讀，句尾漸弱。
That's too soon; I need at least a week. 太快了，我至少需要一週。
“He became dizzy,that's all.”
他只是頭暈了一下，就這樣。
that's all 把一場病輕輕帶過，越是輕描淡寫越讓人不安。
... , that's all.
把大事說小、淡化對方的擔心時用；口氣輕鬆，適合安慰人。
He just felt faint, nothing more. ／ It's nothing serious, that's all.
中性
became dizzy 連讀，that's all 收得輕。
She was just tired, that's all. 她只是累了，沒別的。
“How would you translate that?”
這句你會怎麼翻譯？
would 把提問變成假設，像在請教，不像在考人。
How would you (do something)?
請教別人看法、徵詢處理方式時用；語氣溫和不逼人。
How would you put it? ／ What would you say that is?
中性
would you 連讀，translate 重音在前。
How would you translate this old proverb? 這句老諺語你會怎麼翻？
Common time. Second beat of the first measure. On A. Second measure,second beat. You see?
四四拍。第一小節的第二拍。 起在A音。 第二小節，第二拍。 看到了嗎？
下一章 · 25doubling the voices跟著人聲走同一旋律這場戲：口述樂譜快到跟不上意思是「讓某人振作、開心起來」。臺詞裡 That should cheer him up 就是「這應該能讓他高興起來」，cheer up 可分開用，代詞放中間。
意思是「最好別、還是不要」。臺詞裡 Better not. He's sleeping 就是「最好別進來，他在睡」，用來委婉地攔下對方的請求。
意思是「被交付、被打入（某境地）」。臺詞裡 Consigned to flames of woe 就是「被投入苦難的火焰」，consign 指把人或物交給某種命運。
意思是「太快了、為時過早」。臺詞裡 It's too soon 就是「太快了」，表示時間不夠、事情還沒來得及做完。
意思是「順路過來、登門探望」。臺詞裡 tell him we came by 就是「替我們問聲好，說我們來過」，come by 指順便來訪。
Do you have me? 臺詞裡口述完一段就問你跟上沒有，Do you have me? 在講步驟、報資訊時很常用，問對方有沒有記住。
