“Then Matt came in and suddenly on him, the lines felt funny.”
後來馬特一進來,到他嘴裡,這些詞突然就好笑了。
用一個 in 的時機和 suddenly 的轉折,把演員與臺詞之間的化學反應說得很準:詞還是那些詞,換個人就活了。這是選角故事裡最漂亮的一句總結。
Then ... came in and suddenly on ..., the ... felt ...
形容某個人一齣現就讓同一件事活起來時用,口語、有畫面;說環境或巧合帶來改變時別用這個句式。
Then he walked in, and the lines came alive. / The same words suddenly worked on him.
口語
Then Matt came in 輕快,suddenly 稍停,the lines felt funny 放慢收。
Then Priya joined and suddenly on her, the dull script felt alive. 後來普里婭來了,到她嘴裡,枯燥的劇本突然活了。
Then Sam walked in and suddenly on him, the routine felt fresh. 後來山姆一進來,到他身上,老套的段子突然新鮮了。
