把它關掉 這裡不是「殺」,是關掉燈。
How come the fluorescents are on? Can we kill that, please?American Hustle · 2013 — 第 4 / 20 章 · 2'15" · C1
牢房裡有人嫌燈太亮,又遞上花草茶,半自嘲地說自己 off the beaten path(不按常理)。接著話題轉到一份短名單,用 what if(要是……怎麼辦)一句句逼對方懷疑自己不在名單上,最後把話說到表白。想學怎麼把關心、試探和拉近距離揉在一起,可以聽這場。
牢房裡燈管刺眼,探視的人嫌這裡像瘋人院,說自己 off the beaten path(不按常理),又遞上花草茶,語氣像在照顧人。隨後把話題轉到艾文和一份短名單:他真正在乎的,只有 on a shortlist(在候選名單上)的那幾個人。接著用 what if(要是……怎麼辦)連問對方是不是根本不在名單上;中間說那些花哨噱頭都是假的,最後連著說喜歡你收尾。想學怎麼把關心、試探和表白揉在一起,可以看這些說法在語氣轉折裡的用法。
這場戲看什麼
留意這幾個短語
fucking asylumoff the beaten pathon a shortlistwhat if
本章短語
不按常理;有點偏門a little unconventional
有人用半自嘲的口氣說自己 off the beaten path(不按常理),承認想法怪、做法偏,不像在道歉,更像先給自己鋪臺階,試探對方反應。
My taste in music is a little off the beaten path.我的音樂口味有點偏門。
他媽的瘋人院
在候選名單上
要是……怎麼辦
花哨噱頭;表面排場
真正算數的事
45 句台詞裡標了 23 處
把它關掉 這裡不是「殺」,是關掉燈。
How come the fluorescents are on? Can we kill that, please?不會做那種傻事 that 指上吊那類事。
There's a wire here, they're scared because people hang themselves, but I know you're too smart for that.他媽的瘋人院——強烈髒話,熟人發洩才用,正式場合絕不能說。
It's like a fucking asylum. Joe, is everybody off today?a little off 裡 t 帶過,little 和 off 貼緊,像自嘲。
Maybe I'm a little off the beaten path.乾裂得厲害 all 是強調,不是「全部」。
Yeah, your lips are all chapped.把世界看成這樣
You think that he sees the world as this只在乎極少數人
cold, dark place, and he cares about nobody but a very few people on a shortlist.名單上的第一位 不是紙面名單,是心裡在乎的順序。
And you think you're on the top of that list.不在名單上 不是紙面名單,是某人在乎誰的排序。
What if you're not? What if you're not on that list?what if you're 連得緊,重音落 not 與 at all。
What if you're not even on that list at all?收下那筆錢 check 是支票,不是檢查。
He'd be in here right now if he took the check, but no, you did.虛擬條件句:假設與事實相反:他收錢才會在這裡,實際是你。
He'd be in here right now if he took the check, but no, you did.給她戴上戒指(結婚) 不是隨手送戒指,指結婚。
No? Yes, he put a ring on her finger.花你賺的錢
She plays with her nails, she watches TV, and she spends your money, the money that you make.定語從句:the money 後接 that you make,補出「你掙的」,讓控訴更具體。
She plays with her nails, she watches TV, and she spends your money, the money that you make.逍遙法外 free 不是免費,是不用坐牢。
I don't like that you're in jail while he's going free.花哨排場——口語/娛樂報道常用,正式評估裡顯得帶刺。
All the razzle-dazzle that he does, it's not good, it's not real, it's fake, it's not real.只有你和上天知道
Who you are is who you are, between you and God, you and your soul. That's what matters.主語從句:Who you are 作主語,後又作表語;重複把「本來面目」說成不可爭辯。
Who you are is who you are, between you and God, you and your soul. That's what matters.我的為人/立場——熟人談原則時用;正式介紹自己會太隨意。
That's what counts, that's what I'm about, and that's what I see in you.我們初次見面時
Tell me you didn't feel it the first time we saw each other.本不該說這種話
I'm not supposed to be talking like this, but I don't care, I'll break the rules.don't 的 t 輕輕帶過,care 重讀,別把兩詞分開。
I'm not supposed to be talking like this, but I don't care, I'll break the rules.Maybe I'm a little off the beaten path.也許我有點不按常理出牌。 用走路偏道來自嘲思路跑偏,輕,卻把危險感說出來了。
What if you're not even on that list at all?要是你根本不在那個名單上呢? 三層遞進:不在前列、不在名單、根本不在,專挑最怕的地方問。
Who you are is who you are, between you and God, you and your soul. That's what matters.你是什麼樣的人就是什麼樣的人,只在你和上帝、你和你的靈魂之間。那才重要。 用同義反復和宗教式措辭,把操控包裝成靈魂告白。
I'm not supposed to be talking like this, but I don't care, I'll break the rules.我本不該說這些,但我不在乎,我願意破例。 先承認越界,再把越界說成誠意,一句話完成免責和進攻。
Tell me you didn't feel it the first time we saw each other.告訴我,我們第一次見面時你毫無感覺。 不是問,是逼對方否認;否定句裡藏著最想要的那個答案。
意思是不按常理、有點偏門。臺詞裡有人說自己 a little off the beaten path(有點不按常理),像是在承認自己做事不走尋常路,帶點自嘲。
說 on a shortlist(在候選名單上)。對話裡提到 a very few people on a shortlist,就是心裡有一份很短的候選名單,只有少數人在上面。
是拿假設追問、逼對方往壞處想。連著問 What if you're not on that list?(萬一你不在名單上呢?)和 What if you're not even on that list at all?(萬一你壓根不在名單上呢?),語氣一步步加重。
不是。它指花哨噱頭、表面排場。臺詞說那些 razzle-dazzle(花哨噱頭)不真實、是假的,明顯是貶義。
可以說 what counts(真正算數的事)。臺詞裡 That's what counts(那才是真正算數的事)就是強調什麼才重要。
字面是「告訴我你沒……」。這個句式把否定內容先說出來,字面上是要求對方否認,語氣卻比直接問「你感覺到了嗎」更逼近;Tell me you didn't feel it... 就是讓「你沒感覺到」這句話先擺到檯面上。
下一章 · 第 5 章on a first-name basis with跑路前為丹尼吵翻
第 1 章last resort放貸生意露底
第 2 章the Picasso of passive-aggressive karate夫妻為太陽燈吵翻
第 3 章mess with your judgement貸款會面突然亮身份
正在看 · 第 4 章off the beaten path牢房探視連勸帶表白
第 5 章on a first-name basis with跑路前為丹尼吵翻
第 6 章quit while you're ahead看倫勃朗時點破贗品
第 7 章out of his league為拉政客入局吵翻
第 8 章grease someone遞上七萬五談賭場執照
第 9 章can't get enough of飯桌上聞亮油談生意
第 10 章back on its feet舉杯吹捧談重建
第 11 章the life of the party為赴宴在電話裡吵翻
第 12 章right off the bat賭場參觀點破黑幫
第 13 章keep the upper hand派對現場談賭場牌照
第 14 章falsified my records套房裡說出真名
第 15 章get over on逼問下落後重結盟
第 16 章get someone on a wire陳述唸到一半有人動槍
第 17 章let something die to let something live飯桌勸離套出內情
第 18 章knock some sense into帆布袋裡憋出計劃
第 19 章pay somebody off兩百萬電匯談崩又談成
第 20 章make this right上門補救反被趕走