上門補救反被趕走：make this right

I want to face you like a man because I want to be real now.

我想像個男人一樣當面面對你，因為我現在想說實話。 把認錯說成當面較量，硬氣和坦白撞在一起，人物立刻立住。

Do you think I would have taken that money if it wasn't the right thing to do?

你覺得如果那筆錢不該拿，我還會拿嗎？ 用反問把貪錢包裝成原則問題，越辯解越露餡，臺詞有勁。

I want to make this right. I came here because I want to make it right.

我想把這事補救好。我來這裡就是因為我想把它補救好。 重複不是囉嗦，是急到只剩這一句；越說越像求饒。

You break my motherfucking heart, Irving, right in front of my family.

你傷透了我的心，艾文，就當著我全家人的面。 髒話和“心碎”並置，憤怒裡露出真受傷；家庭被拉進背叛現場。

This is what matters to me most, and you're crushing that.

這是我最看重的東西，而你正在把它碾碎。 把家庭說成“最看重”，再用 crushing 把抽象傷害變成動作，收得狠。