“They were shot with a 9mm Luger.”
他們是被九毫米魯格手槍打死的。
一句平靜的技術說明,越是不帶情緒越讓人發冷:連口徑都報得清楚,說明兇手不慌。它適合放在懸疑敘事裡,用冷靜的口吻交代最重的事實。
They were shot with a ...
冷靜陳述兇案細節或技術事即時用,語氣平直、不加修飾。
They were killed with a handgun. / The weapon was a 9mm pistol.
中性
They were shot 平讀,9mm Luger 每個音都咬清,句尾降調。
The victims were killed with a hunting rifle. 遇害者是被獵槍打死的。
The gunman used a 45-caliber pistol. 槍手用的是一把點四五口徑手槍。
