when you are clear-headed
How does Mr. Anderson's play read when you're sober?Deathtrap · 1982 — 第 3 / 30 章 · 3'00" · B2
A washed-up playwright reads a young rival's script and jokes that it is "flawless" — then talks, half-seriously, about killing the author and sending the masterpiece out under his own name. His wife keeps steering him toward a less lethal option: collaboration, with a 50-50 split and top billing for him.
Sidney Bruhl and his wife Myra read a play by a young writer, Clifford Anderson. Sidney calls it 'flawless' — which, for him, is a problem. He jokes about killing the author with a mace and publishing the play under his own name. Myra suggests a cleaner plan: collaborate, and split the profit.
注目の表現
coming out of the closettop billingsplit it 50-50I dare say not
このシーンの表現
first billing
Laying out his terms, Sidney takes the lead credit for himself before anything else.
She shared the stage but still got top billing.
revealing one's sexuality
divide it equally
I suppose not
working in production
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when you are clear-headed
How does Mr. Anderson's play read when you're sober?time clause: The when-clause sets the moment of clear judgement, implying the present view is unreliable.
How does Mr. Anderson's play read when you're sober?take action on it
So maybe you should do something about it.a contemptible man — A crude insult; keep it out of formal talk.
What I should do is beat the fat bastard on the head...large enough to
Burying him in a hole big enough to accommodate his bloat...in your own name
And then send his little masterpiece off under my own name.The d in send and h in his often drop, blurring into sen-is-little.
And then send his little masterpiece off under my own name.why bother doing it
I mean, what's the point in owning a mace if you don't use it?Don't use it links up and can sound like don-choo-zit.
I mean, what's the point in owning a mace if you don't use it?stage a play
Why don't you produce the play?able to do something
Darling, though I might be capable of killing Clifford Anderson...concessive clause: The though-clause concedes one dark possibility before the second half turns the joke.
Darling, though I might be capable of killing Clifford Anderson...not capable of
I am not up to the criminal behavior of a Broadway producer.Not up to runs together, almost like no-tup-to.
I am not up to the criminal behavior of a Broadway producer.work together on
Have you thought about collaborating on the play on Deathtrap?style and sparkle
It wouldn't hurt if it got some of that Sidney Bruhl polish and pizzazz.a total beginner
Don 't tell me that an absolute amateur wouldn 't be thrilled...make it racier
You mean, I sex it up a little and then split it 50-50?make it racier — Showbiz slang for spicing up a work.
You mean, I sex it up a little and then split it 50-50?the leading credit — Theatre slang, also used for anyone getting the spotlight.
And of course I 'd get top billing.by virtue of
Why not? On the basis of who you are.Of reduces to a weak uh-v and links onto basis.
Why not? On the basis of who you are.mixed tenses: Were and are joins past and present to insist the title still belongs to him.
You were and are the author of The Murder Game...to the same degree as me
You mind the failure as much as I do, don't you Myra?comparison: As much as I do compares their feelings, with do standing in for the verb already used.
You mind the failure as much as I do, don't you Myra?detecting
The next day Helga Ten Dorp's out there, picking up psychic vibrations.doubt it
Helga Ten Dorp from Holland? I hardly think that's likely.Out of the blurs into outa-tha in fast speech.
I thought he was finally coming out of the closet.revealing one's sexuality — Casual but personal; handle with care.
I thought he was finally coming out of the closet.invite someone to dinner
Oh, listen, Nan and Tom had her over for dinner last week.The scene is a comedy about envy, and it plays the murder as a running gag. Sidney's first verdict on the rival script is 'It's worse than I thought. It's flawless' — the joke being that quality is the threat. From there he spins out a fantasy of violence ('beat the fat bastard on the head'), then immediately hides behind his own cowardice: 'I am not up to the criminal behavior of a Broadway producer.' Myra supplies the practical answer — collaboration, a 50-50 split, and top billing — which is the plot's real trap in disguise. The scene asks the audience to laugh along while quietly setting up a deathtrap.
And then send his little masterpiece off under my own name.The fantasy's punchline: steal the script and let the world credit Sidney for it, which is the real motive behind the joking.
I am not up to the criminal behavior of a Broadway producer.Sidney's self-deprecating excuse: he can imagine murder but claims he lacks the guts to be a real producer.
I thought he was finally coming out of the closet.A throwaway joke about a guest who was really just imitating someone else, letting the scene drift into gossip.
It's worse than I thought. It's flawless.The verdict on the rival play: it is so good that it is a catastrophe for Sidney.
You sure you don't mean who I was?Sidney's bitter aside: praise of him now is really nostalgia for the famous writer he used to be.
Because Clifford's play is better than anything Sidney can write now. Stealing it — even by killing the author — looks like the only way back to success.
Collaboration. She proposes that Sidney polish the play, split the profits 50-50, and take top billing, which becomes the plan the film runs with.
The talk stays cloaked as a joke here, but the details are specific: a mace, the carpet, burying the body, then publishing the play. The film later turns the joke into the plot.
A Dutch psychic the Bruhls discuss. She is renting a cottage nearby, and Myra says she has told neighbors private details about them.
次のチャプター · 第 4 章a god-sent opportunityMyra Urges Sidney to Call Anderson
第 1 章truth in advertisingSidney's Play Flops on Opening Night
第 2 章add insult to injurySidney Rants About Being Written Out
再生中 · 第 3 章top billingSidney Plots to Steal a Play
第 4 章a god-sent opportunityMyra Urges Sidney to Call Anderson
第 5 章all the makingsSidney Calls Clifford About His Play
第 6 章got hooked onClifford Anderson Visits the Bruhls
第 7 章feet on the groundMyra Pushes Sidney to Collaborate
第 8 章go out of your wayClifford Asks for a Second Opinion
第 9 章hit a snagSidney Handcuffs Clifford
第 10 章untypical of meClifford Is Handcuffed
第 11 章the envy ofSidney Kills Clifford
第 12 章night and dayMyra Finally Tells Sidney to Leave
第 13 章guilt-riddenHelga Ten Dorp Arrives
第 14 章keep uncloudedHelga Foresees the Knife
第 15 章skeptical aboutHelga Predicts the Deathtrap
第 16 章once and for allMyra Hears Something Downstairs
第 17 章be my doingSidney Promises Nothing Will Go Wrong
第 18 章for future referenceThe Fake Murder Kills Myra
第 19 章lay an eggPorter Milgrim Meets the Secretary
第 20 章on the agendaPorter Reviews Sidney's Will
第 21 章a death wishSidney Pitches Deathtrap
第 22 章knock offClifford Wants a Shortcut
第 23 章be in on itClifford Talks Sidney Into Deathtrap
第 24 章kid a kidderBruhl and Anderson Team Up
第 25 章psychicHelga Meets the Man in Boots
第 26 章fed up withHelga Warns Sidney Again
第 27 章spill the beansThe Rehearsal Turns Deadly
第 28 章send someone packingClifford Turns the Gun on Sidney
第 29 章a snapClifford Turns the Tables on Sidney
第 30 章a can of wormsClifford Spares Sidney