prepositional relative: The from which clause describes the outline the writer has drifted away from.
I've got the outline, from which I've departed considerably, though.Deathtrap · 1982 — 第 7 / 30 章 · 3'04" · B2
Clifford arrives with his play, and the evening starts warmly — a toast to Deathtrap, Myra joining as a reader. Then the mood turns: Sidney learns there is no second carbon copy, and Myra launches into a speech urging him to 'put aside' his own work and collaborate with the young writer.
Clifford Anderson arrives at the Bruhls' house with the manuscript, happy to explain how he laid it out in loose leaves. He, Sidney and Myra drink a toast to Deathtrap and start reading together. But when Sidney realizes Clifford has no second carbon copy, the talk shifts, and Myra pushes Sidney to set aside his own play and work with Clifford.
注目の表現
loose leafright about itbursting withon my mind
このシーンの表現
practical and realistic
Myra casts herself as the practical one, eyes fixed on the money while her husband dreams.
He keeps his feet on the ground despite the sudden fame.
separate unbound pages
correct about it
full of, unable to hold back
troubling my thoughts
set something aside for now
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prepositional relative: The from which clause describes the outline the writer has drifted away from.
I've got the outline, from which I've departed considerably, though.separate unbound pages
Clifford hands over his script and explains it is loose leaf, one scene to a page.
Page per scene, loose leaf.a walk of two hours
It's a two-hour walk to the station, so I had to leave right after we spoke.celebrated with a drink
It'll be toasted with more than ginger ale someday...the earliest reader
Darling, this is Clifford's first play and I am its first reader.In fast speech this is reduces to a light this-s.
Darling, this is Clifford's first play and I am its first reader.writers, often self-mocking — Insider self-mockery; playful among writers.
Between us two hacks.called in to a place
I've been summoned to the principal's office.briefly
Let me think for a moment.fit to be staged
From aspiring playwrights, supposedly ready for production...make it a big success
He could turn it into a hit that would run for years...a big success — Show-business jargon for a sure crowd-pleaser.
He could turn it into a hit that would run for years...plenty
And make more than enough money for everyone concerned...Link been and on so they run together.
I'm gonna say something that's been on my mind for sometime.going to — Everyday speech; avoid it in formal writing.
I'm gonna say something that's been on my mind for sometime.the result of
To give you the fruit of his years of experience...practical and realistic
Myra casts herself as the practical one, eyes fixed on the money while her husband dreams.
I am the one whose feet are on the ground, whose eye is on the checkbook.relative clause: Parallel whose-clauses stack two traits onto the same person.
I am the one whose feet are on the ground, whose eye is on the checkbook.Blend eye is on into one smooth string.
I am the one whose feet are on the ground, whose eye is on the checkbook.surprise someone greatly
I'm gonna make a suggestion to you Sydney and it's gonna come as a big shock to you.object complement: The to-infinitive completes the object you, naming the action wanted.
But I'm going to make it anyway and I want you to give it your grave, earnest and your thoughtful consideration.work together with
Collaborate with him. That's the suggestion I'm making, Sidney.The pleasantries hide a negotiation. Clifford is thrilled to be read by a famous playwright — 'I've been summoned to the principal's office,' he jokes — and Myra plays the gracious host until she sees an opening. When it turns out there is only one copy of the script, Sidney pauses to think, and Myra takes over. Her speech reframes the whole visit: 'I am the one whose feet are on the ground, whose eye is on the checkbook.' She argues that Sidney's 'hard-earned knowledge' shouldn't be given away 'without any quid pro quo,' and lands on the real request: 'Collaborate with him.' What began as an eager young writer showing off his pages becomes a push to turn his script into Sidney's next hit.
I am the one whose feet are on the ground, whose eye is on the checkbook.Myra's self-description: she is the practical half of the couple, the one watching the money while Sidney thinks about art.
As if that stupid seminar were still in session.Her complaint that Clifford is treating Sidney like a teacher rather than a fellow professional now that the class is over.
Collaborate with him. That's the suggestion I'm making, Sidney.The blunt proposal that closes her speech: stop competing and join the young writer's project.
Darling, this is Clifford's first play and I am its first reader.Myra makes the case for being included in the reading, claiming a special stake in the script as its very first reader.
I've been summoned to the principal's office.Clifford's joke about how it feels to be called in by a famous playwright, turning his nerves into a self-deprecating line.
She thinks Clifford's play has real potential and that Sidney's experience could turn it into a long-running hit that makes money for everyone involved.
It's Latin for an exchange — something given in return for something else. Myra uses it to argue Sidney shouldn't hand over his experience for nothing.
Sidney discovers Clifford brought only one copy of the manuscript, so Myra can't read along easily — and the missing carbon copy becomes the opening for her to take charge.
She tells Sidney to put aside the play he's writing, the one about Helga Ten Dorp, and collaborate with Clifford on his script instead.
Yes — he jokes that being read by Sidney feels like being summoned to the principal's office, but he seems pleased and open to working with him.
次のチャプター · 第 8 章go out of your wayClifford Asks for a Second Opinion
第 1 章truth in advertisingSidney's Play Flops on Opening Night
第 2 章add insult to injurySidney Rants About Being Written Out
第 3 章top billingSidney Plots to Steal a Play
第 4 章a god-sent opportunityMyra Urges Sidney to Call Anderson
第 5 章all the makingsSidney Calls Clifford About His Play
第 6 章got hooked onClifford Anderson Visits the Bruhls
再生中 · 第 7 章feet on the groundMyra Pushes Sidney to Collaborate
第 8 章go out of your wayClifford Asks for a Second Opinion
第 9 章hit a snagSidney Handcuffs Clifford
第 10 章untypical of meClifford Is Handcuffed
第 11 章the envy ofSidney Kills Clifford
第 12 章night and dayMyra Finally Tells Sidney to Leave
第 13 章guilt-riddenHelga Ten Dorp Arrives
第 14 章keep uncloudedHelga Foresees the Knife
第 15 章skeptical aboutHelga Predicts the Deathtrap
第 16 章once and for allMyra Hears Something Downstairs
第 17 章be my doingSidney Promises Nothing Will Go Wrong
第 18 章for future referenceThe Fake Murder Kills Myra
第 19 章lay an eggPorter Milgrim Meets the Secretary
第 20 章on the agendaPorter Reviews Sidney's Will
第 21 章a death wishSidney Pitches Deathtrap
第 22 章knock offClifford Wants a Shortcut
第 23 章be in on itClifford Talks Sidney Into Deathtrap
第 24 章kid a kidderBruhl and Anderson Team Up
第 25 章psychicHelga Meets the Man in Boots
第 26 章fed up withHelga Warns Sidney Again
第 27 章spill the beansThe Rehearsal Turns Deadly
第 28 章send someone packingClifford Turns the Gun on Sidney
第 29 章a snapClifford Turns the Tables on Sidney
第 30 章a can of wormsClifford Spares Sidney