把它关掉 这里不是「杀」,是关掉灯。
How come the fluorescents are on? Can we kill that, please?American Hustle · 2013 — 第 4 / 20 章 · 2'15" · C1
牢房里有人嫌灯太亮,又递上花草茶,半自嘲地说自己 off the beaten path(不按常理)。接着话题转到一份短名单,用 what if(要是……怎么办)一句句逼对方怀疑自己不在名单上,最后把话说到表白。想学怎么把关心、试探和拉近距离揉在一起,可以听这场。
牢房里灯管刺眼,探视的人嫌这里像疯人院,说自己 off the beaten path(不按常理),又递上花草茶,语气像在照顾人。随后把话题转到艾文和一份短名单:他真正在乎的,只有 on a shortlist(在候选名单上)的那几个人。接着用 what if(要是……怎么办)连问对方是不是根本不在名单上;中间说那些花哨噱头都是假的,最后连着说喜欢你收尾。想学怎么把关心、试探和表白揉在一起,可以看这些说法在语气转折里的用法。
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留意这几个短语
fucking asylumoff the beaten pathon a shortlistwhat if
本章短语
不按常理;有点偏门a little unconventional
有人用半自嘲的口气说自己 off the beaten path(不按常理),承认想法怪、做法偏,不像在道歉,更像先给自己铺台阶,试探对方反应。
My taste in music is a little off the beaten path.我的音乐口味有点偏门。
他妈的疯人院
在候选名单上
要是……怎么办
花哨噱头;表面排场
真正算数的事
45 句台词里标了 23 处
把它关掉 这里不是「杀」,是关掉灯。
How come the fluorescents are on? Can we kill that, please?不会做那种傻事 that 指上吊那类事。
There's a wire here, they're scared because people hang themselves, but I know you're too smart for that.他妈的疯人院——强烈脏话,熟人发泄才用,正式场合绝不能说。
It's like a fucking asylum. Joe, is everybody off today?a little off 里 t 带过,little 和 off 贴紧,像自嘲。
Maybe I'm a little off the beaten path.干裂得厉害 all 是强调,不是「全部」。
Yeah, your lips are all chapped.把世界看成这样
You think that he sees the world as this只在乎极少数人
cold, dark place, and he cares about nobody but a very few people on a shortlist.名单上的第一位 不是纸面名单,是心里在乎的顺序。
And you think you're on the top of that list.不在名单上 不是纸面名单,是某人在乎谁的排序。
What if you're not? What if you're not on that list?what if you're 连得紧,重音落 not 与 at all。
What if you're not even on that list at all?收下那笔钱 check 是支票,不是检查。
He'd be in here right now if he took the check, but no, you did.虚拟条件句:假设与事实相反:他收钱才会在这里,实际是你。
He'd be in here right now if he took the check, but no, you did.给她戴上戒指(结婚) 不是随手送戒指,指结婚。
No? Yes, he put a ring on her finger.花你赚的钱
She plays with her nails, she watches TV, and she spends your money, the money that you make.定语从句:the money 后接 that you make,补出「你挣的」,让控诉更具体。
She plays with her nails, she watches TV, and she spends your money, the money that you make.逍遥法外 free 不是免费,是不用坐牢。
I don't like that you're in jail while he's going free.花哨排场——口语/娱乐报道常用,正式评估里显得带刺。
All the razzle-dazzle that he does, it's not good, it's not real, it's fake, it's not real.只有你和上天知道
Who you are is who you are, between you and God, you and your soul. That's what matters.主语从句:Who you are 作主语,后又作表语;重复把「本来面目」说成不可争辩。
Who you are is who you are, between you and God, you and your soul. That's what matters.我的为人/立场——熟人谈原则时用;正式介绍自己会太随意。
That's what counts, that's what I'm about, and that's what I see in you.我们初次见面时
Tell me you didn't feel it the first time we saw each other.本不该说这种话
I'm not supposed to be talking like this, but I don't care, I'll break the rules.don't 的 t 轻轻带过,care 重读,别把两词分开。
I'm not supposed to be talking like this, but I don't care, I'll break the rules.Maybe I'm a little off the beaten path.也许我有点不按常理出牌。 用走路偏道来自嘲思路跑偏,轻,却把危险感说出来了。
What if you're not even on that list at all?要是你根本不在那个名单上呢? 三层递进:不在前列、不在名单、根本不在,专挑最怕的地方问。
Who you are is who you are, between you and God, you and your soul. That's what matters.你是什么样的人就是什么样的人,只在你和上帝、你和你的灵魂之间。那才重要。 用同义反复和宗教式措辞,把操控包装成灵魂告白。
I'm not supposed to be talking like this, but I don't care, I'll break the rules.我本不该说这些,但我不在乎,我愿意破例。 先承认越界,再把越界说成诚意,一句话完成免责和进攻。
Tell me you didn't feel it the first time we saw each other.告诉我,我们第一次见面时你毫无感觉。 不是问,是逼对方否认;否定句里藏着最想要的那个答案。
意思是不按常理、有点偏门。台词里有人说自己 a little off the beaten path(有点不按常理),像是在承认自己做事不走寻常路,带点自嘲。
说 on a shortlist(在候选名单上)。对话里提到 a very few people on a shortlist,就是心里有一份很短的候选名单,只有少数人在上面。
是拿假设追问、逼对方往坏处想。连着问 What if you're not on that list?(万一你不在名单上呢?)和 What if you're not even on that list at all?(万一你压根不在名单上呢?),语气一步步加重。
不是。它指花哨噱头、表面排场。台词说那些 razzle-dazzle(花哨噱头)不真实、是假的,明显是贬义。
可以说 what counts(真正算数的事)。台词里 That's what counts(那才是真正算数的事)就是强调什么才重要。
字面是「告诉我你没……」。这个句式把否定内容先说出来,字面上是要求对方否认,语气却比直接问「你感觉到了吗」更逼近;Tell me you didn't feel it... 就是让「你没感觉到」这句话先摆到台面上。
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第 1 章last resort放贷生意露底
第 2 章the Picasso of passive-aggressive karate夫妻为太阳灯吵翻
第 3 章mess with your judgement贷款会面突然亮身份
正在看 · 第 4 章off the beaten path牢房探视连劝带表白
第 5 章on a first-name basis with跑路前为丹尼吵翻
第 6 章quit while you're ahead看伦勃朗时点破赝品
第 7 章out of his league为拉政客入局吵翻
第 8 章grease someone递上七万五谈赌场执照
第 9 章can't get enough of饭桌上闻亮油谈生意
第 10 章back on its feet举杯吹捧谈重建
第 11 章the life of the party为赴宴在电话里吵翻
第 12 章right off the bat赌场参观点破黑帮
第 13 章keep the upper hand派对现场谈赌场牌照
第 14 章falsified my records套房里说出真名
第 15 章get over on逼问下落后重结盟
第 16 章get someone on a wire陈述念到一半有人动枪
第 17 章let something die to let something live饭桌劝离套出内情
第 18 章knock some sense into帆布袋里憋出计划
第 19 章pay somebody off两百万电汇谈崩又谈成
第 20 章make this right上门补救反被赶走