lying unused somewhere
I had an original story kicking around Paramount.Sunset Boulevard · 1950 — 第 2 / 19 章 · 3'31" · B2
Joe Gillis pitches a baseball story to a producer who has heard it all before. The reader, Betty Schaefer, calls the script 'flat and trite,' and Joe shoots back about pictures with a message. Beneath the sparring is a man who needs a paycheck and cannot afford to be choosy.
Joe Gillis goes to Paramount to pitch his original baseball story, 'Bases Loaded,' to the producer Sheldrake, who has heard every angle before. A young reader, Betty Schaefer, is brought in and says the script is flat and trite, sparking an argument about what pictures should say. In the end Sheldrake has no work for Joe.
注目の表現
dead as a doornailbig shotgo straightall wet
このシーンの表現
powerless and trapped
Begging for any assignment, Joe admits he is over a barrel, with no leverage left.
The delay put us over a barrel with the client.
completely finished
an important person
reform and live honestly
completely mistaken
terribly poor quality
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lying unused somewhere
I had an original story kicking around Paramount.completely finished
Recalling the script, Joe says his agent declared it dead as a doornail, resigned and dry.
My agent told me it was dead as a doornail.Link dead, as and a so they run together as one stretch.
My agent told me it was dead as a doornail.an important person
But I knew a big shot over there who'd always liked me.an important person — Mildly mocking; do not use it to someone's face.
But I knew a big shot over there who'd always liked me.the moment had arrived
And the time had come to take a little advantage of it.infinitive as modifier: The infinitive to prove it modifies ulcers, framing the illness as evidence of his cleverness.
He was a smart producer, with a set of ulcers to prove it.What's your is reduced in fast speech, almost like wats-yer.
All right, Gillis, you've got five minutes. What's your story about?completely mistaken — Old-fashioned slang for being wrong; too casual for formal talk.
They're pretty hot about it over at Twentieth, except I think Zanuck's all wet.a refreshing switch
Be a good change of pace for Ladd.loses his senses
And there's a great little part for Bill Demarest, one of the trainers, an old-time player who got beaned, goes out of his head sometimes.relative clause: The relative clause who got beaned tells us why this old player sometimes loses his senses.
And there's a great little part for Bill Demarest, one of the trainers, an old-time player who got beaned, goes out of his head sometimes.terribly poor — Show-business slang; most people outside the trade will not follow it.
- What's wrong with it? - It's from hunger.a stale repeat
It's just a rehash of something that wasn't very good to begin with.want to hide in shame
Having just trashed the script, Betty realizes the writer is right there and wishes she could vanish.
Right now I wish I could crawl in a hole and pull it in after me.The t in didn't often drops, so didn't think runs together.
Oh, I'm sorry, Mr. Gillis, but I just didn't think it was any good.dull and clichéd
I found it flat and trite.make a living
That was last year. This year I'm trying to earn a living.powerless and trapped
Begging for any assignment, Joe admits he is over a barrel, with no leverage left.
- I'm over a barrel. I need a job. - I haven't got a thing.persuaded me to do
Last year somebody talked me into buying a ranch in the Valley.purpose clause: Each so I could clause states a purpose, showing a chain of borrowing that keeps looping back.
This year I had to mortgage the ranch so I could keep up my life insurance, so I could borrow on my insurance...The scene is a job interview disguised as a story meeting. Sheldrake gives Joe five minutes and then dismantles him with two words — 'It's from hunger' — the casual cruelty of a man who has heard a thousand pitches. What makes it sting is Betty: she is young, honest, and the only one who bothers to say why, calling the script 'flat and trite.' Joe's defence is bitterness dressed as principle. He sneers at 'one of the message kids' while admitting, 'That was last year. This year I'm trying to earn a living.' By the end the roles have flipped: the screenwriter is begging for 'any kind of an assignment,' any dialogue, anything, and Sheldrake is the one groaning about a mortgaged ranch. Both men are over a barrel.
My agent told me it was dead as a doornail.Joe's own agent already declared his story hopeless, yet he brings it to Paramount anyway — the first sign of how thin his options are.
He was a smart producer, with a set of ulcers to prove it.A one-line portrait of the producer: sharp, successful, and paying for it with his stomach.
It's just a rehash of something that wasn't very good to begin with.Betty's verdict on the script: not just bad, but recycled from bad material.
Right now I wish I could crawl in a hole and pull it in after me.Betty's embarrassment at having trashed a writer to his face, put in one vivid image.
That was last year. This year I'm trying to earn a living.Joe's answer when someone brings up his talent: he has stopped chasing art and is now chasing rent.
- I'm over a barrel. I need a job. - I haven't got a thing.The exchange that ends the pitch: Joe is trapped and desperate, and Sheldrake has nothing to give.
He has an original story sitting there and a contact, the producer Sheldrake, who has liked his work before. He needs money and decides to use the connection.
She finds it 'flat and trite,' and tells Joe to his face. It is her honesty, more than Sheldrake's dismissal, that wounds him.
She is young and still idealistic, while Joe has given up on writing anything meaningful in order to make a living, and her judgement reminds him of that.
It is old Hollywood slang for something that is hopelessly bad — a script so weak it would not be worth anyone's time.
No. He insists there is nothing, and when Joe presses, Sheldrake turns the talk to his own money troubles, leaving Joe with nothing.
次のチャプター · 第 3 章a white elephantJoe Is Mistaken for the Undertaker
第 1 章there's gonna be fireworksThe Repo Men Come for the Car
再生中 · 第 2 章over a barrelJoe Pitches Bases Loaded at Paramount
第 3 章a white elephantJoe Is Mistaken for the Undertaker
第 4 章It's the pictures that got smallNorma Desmond: The Pictures Got Small
第 5 章a pressing engagementNorma Makes Joe Read Salome
第 6 章make it worth your whileNorma Hires Joe to Fix Her Script
第 7 章not by a long shotNorma Moves Joe Into Her Mansion
第 8 章a matter of life and deathNorma Buys Joe New Clothes
第 9 章take me for grantedNorma's New Year's Eve Confession
第 10 章close, but no cigarJoe Meets Betty at Artie's Party
第 11 章sell on somethingNorma Sends Her Script to DeMille
第 12 章write on specBetty Asks Joe to Write With Her
第 13 章give someone the brushNorma Desmond Returns to Paramount
第 14 章nothing would please me moreNorma Desmond's Comeback Falls Apart
第 15 章sell like hotcakesJoe and Betty Write the Script Together
第 16 章come cleanBetty Tells Joe the Nose Story
第 17 章wipe outBetty Confesses She Loves Joe
第 18 章a good dealJoe Shows Betty Norma's Mansion
第 19 章have the heart toJoe Tells Norma He's Leaving