come inside
Well, for heaven's sakes! Come on in, have a chair.Sunset Boulevard · 1950 — 第 15 / 19 章 · 3'11" · B1
Betty Schaefer comes to Joe's place to rewrite his story, offering to be 'completely at your disposal' while Artie is on location. They turn it into a story about teachers sharing a room and a bed in shifts, and the work goes so well it becomes something else. Meanwhile Max learns the studio only wants Norma's car.
Joe Gillis and Betty Schaefer work on their script together, since Artie is away on location in Arizona. Joe throws out the psychological material and builds a story about two poor teachers who share a room and a bed in shifts. Betty scolds him for being chicken-hearted. Meanwhile Max discovers that Paramount only ever wanted to rent Norma's car, though Norma believes her comeback is nearly settled.
注目の表現
for heaven's sakessell like hotcakesat your disposalon location
このシーンの表現
sell very fast
Joe says the psychological angle is worn out and that psychopath stories are what really sell.
Cheap horror sequels sell like hotcakes every October.
an exclamation of surprise
ready to be used or commanded
filming away from the studio
timid, easily scared
in turns, by rotation
48 行のセリフに 28 件のメモ
come inside
Well, for heaven's sakes! Come on in, have a chair.Run come on in together as one phrase.
Well, for heaven's sakes! Come on in, have a chair.take what you want
I mean it. It's no good to me, anyway. Help yourself.if clause: The if clause sets a real condition, and the present tense stands for the future.
If you get an Oscar, I get the left foot.accept an offer
You know, I'd take you up on that in a minute.Link take you up on into one smooth run.
You know, I'd take you up on that in a minute.entirely on my own
I'm just not good enough to do it all by myself.be reasonable
Well, see if they make sense.discard something
To begin with, I think you should throw out all that psychological mess, - exploring a killer's sick mind. - Psychopaths sell like hotcakes.evening classes
Now, I see her teaching day classes while he teaches night school.if that is all right with you
Look, if you don't mind, I haven't time to listen to the whole plot.keep it brief
- I'll make it short. - I'm sorry. It's your baby now.that is good to hear
Oh. Oh, well, good for you. You couldn't find a nicer guy.Good for you links up, with for reduced to fer.
Oh. Oh, well, good for you. You couldn't find a nicer guy.man, person — Very casual; formal writing prefers man or person.
Oh. Oh, well, good for you. You couldn't find a nicer guy.if you like
We could work at your place, if you want.truly, I mean it
- Honest to goodness, I hate you! - And don't make it too dreary.use the same one
- Right. - They don't even know each other, but they share the same room. It's cheaper that way.parenthetical phrase: Of course is a parenthetical aside, adding a teasing note to the sentence.
As a matter of fact, they sleep in the same bed. In shifts, of course.you must be joking
Are you kidding? Because I think it's good.joking — Everyday speech; avoid it in formal writing.
Are you kidding? Because I think it's good.the cause of something
- What's the matter, Max? - I just found out the reason for all those telephone calls from Paramount.try to help out
Well, goodbye, Norma. We'll see what we can do.went perfectly
- How'd it go? - It couldn't have gone better.stop thinking about
Get Gordon Cole. Tell him to forget about her car.endure something
She went through a merciless series of treatments.resolved to do something
She was absolutely determined to be ready, ready for those cameras that would never turn.relative clause: The clause modifies cameras, and would marks a future seen from the past.
She was absolutely determined to be ready, ready for those cameras that would never turn.This is a love story written in the form of a rewrite. Betty claims she is free because Artie is away, and Joe cannot quite refuse her: 'I'd take you up on that in a minute.' Their version of the story keeps drifting toward their own situation — two people who barely know each other sharing the same room, and, as Betty puts it, 'they sleep in the same bed. In shifts, of course.' The joke is the courtship. Joe knows it, which is why he calls the whole thing out — 'Look, Betty, it can't be done. It's out!' — and why Betty has to bully him: 'Now, stop being chicken-hearted and write that story!' Against this, Norma's return is pure illusion. Max discovers the studio only wanted to rent her car, yet Norma tells DeMille 'Everything will be fine' and starts counting calories to be ready for cameras that will never turn.
If you get an Oscar, I get the left foot.Betty's joking way of asking for a share of the credit, teasing Joe with a silly prize for helping him.
This is a story about teachers, their threadbare lives, their struggle!Joe's pitch for the story he prefers: real, struggling teachers rather than the cheap thrills of a killer's mind.
Now, stop being chicken-hearted and write that story!Betty's push to make Joe commit, calling his hesitation cowardice so he will finally write.
As a matter of fact, they sleep in the same bed. In shifts, of course.The plot twist that mirrors the two of them: strangers sharing a room, and a bed, on alternating shifts.
It's not Madame they want. It's her car they want to rent.Max's discovery that the studio's interest was never in Norma's comeback but in renting her antique car.
Like an athlete training for the Olympic Games, she counted every calorie.The voiceover image of Norma's discipline as she prepares her body like an athlete for a role.
She was absolutely determined to be ready, ready for those cameras that would never turn.The chapter's quiet cruelty: she readies herself for cameras that will never film her again.
She wants them to write the story together while Artie is away on location. She claims to be completely at his disposal and suggests working at his place.
He is resisting the collaboration, though not very hard. Working with Betty means getting closer to her, and he knows his life with Norma makes that dangerous.
DeMille's phone manner leaves her believing a deal is nearly set. In fact the studio only wanted to rent her car, a truth Max finds out and she refuses to accept.
She is preparing herself to face the cameras again, training like an athlete for a role she thinks is hers. The cameras, however, are never going to turn.
It means available to be used or commanded. Betty says she is completely at Joe's disposal, offering all her free evenings and weekends to work on the script.
次のチャプター · 第 16 章come cleanBetty Tells Joe the Nose Story
第 1 章there's gonna be fireworksThe Repo Men Come for the Car
第 2 章over a barrelJoe Pitches Bases Loaded at Paramount
第 3 章a white elephantJoe Is Mistaken for the Undertaker
第 4 章It's the pictures that got smallNorma Desmond: The Pictures Got Small
第 5 章a pressing engagementNorma Makes Joe Read Salome
第 6 章make it worth your whileNorma Hires Joe to Fix Her Script
第 7 章not by a long shotNorma Moves Joe Into Her Mansion
第 8 章a matter of life and deathNorma Buys Joe New Clothes
第 9 章take me for grantedNorma's New Year's Eve Confession
第 10 章close, but no cigarJoe Meets Betty at Artie's Party
第 11 章sell on somethingNorma Sends Her Script to DeMille
第 12 章write on specBetty Asks Joe to Write With Her
第 13 章give someone the brushNorma Desmond Returns to Paramount
第 14 章nothing would please me moreNorma Desmond's Comeback Falls Apart
再生中 · 第 15 章sell like hotcakesJoe and Betty Write the Script Together
第 16 章come cleanBetty Tells Joe the Nose Story
第 17 章wipe outBetty Confesses She Loves Joe
第 18 章a good dealJoe Shows Betty Norma's Mansion
第 19 章have the heart toJoe Tells Norma He's Leaving