“Bait the hook well. This fish will bite!”
Why it's great
A fishing metaphor turns a staged lie into a deliberate hunt, and the speaker knows it.
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Bait the hook well and he will walk right into it.
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Don Pedro Tricks Benedick, Explained
Much Ado About Nothing · 1993
Chapter 11 of 24 · 2'49"
Benedick believes he's overhearing a private conversation, but the whole thing is staged for his ears alone. Don Pedro and Leonato pile on detail after detail about Beatrice secretly pining for him, all of it designed to land on one hidden listener. Someone sums up the trick: "Bait the hook well. This fish will bite!"
Key moments
Start here, then watch the full scene- 0:17–0:58
Leonato Claims Beatrice Loves Benedick
41s - 0:59–1:42
Setting the Bait for Benedick
43s - 1:43–2:12
How They Say Beatrice Suffers
29s
Don Pedro Tricks Benedick, explained
What happens
While Balthazar's song ends at Leonato's house, Don Pedro, Leonato, and Claudio stage a conversation about Beatrice. They say she is hopelessly in love with Benedick and hides it behind open scorn. Benedick, listening out of sight, believes every word. They decide not to tell him directly, but to let Hero report how Beatrice weeps and prays for him.
What's really going on
The joke is that Benedick has spent the whole play insisting he'll never marry, and now he's being played by a performance aimed straight at him. The details are absurdly specific — Beatrice writing sheet after sheet, then "down upon her knees she falls" and crying "Oh, sweet Benedick!" — which is exactly why they work on him. He even tries to doubt it: "I should think this a trick, but that the grey-bearded fellow speaks it." That line is the tell. He doubts the content but trusts the old man delivering it, and once Leonato's beard becomes proof, the trap is set. The scene isn't really about Beatrice's feelings; it's about how quickly a proud man can be talked into wanting to be loved.
Key lines & what they mean
- “Bait the hook well. This fish will bite!”
- A fishing metaphor for the sting: prepare the bait properly and the target will take it. Here the 'fish' is Benedick, and the bait is the story of Beatrice's love.
- “Nor I neither, but most wonderful that she should dote on Signior Benedick whom she hath in all outward behaviours seemed ever to abhor.”
- Everyone agrees Beatrice seemed to hate Benedick in public, which is exactly what makes her secret love, as they tell it, so astonishing — and so convincing to him.
- “There was never counterfeit of passion came so near the life of passion as she discovers it.”
- They claim her act is indistinguishable from real passion. It's the most persuasive line in the bait: a fake feeling that looks this real must be real.
- “An' he had been a dog that should have howled thus, they'd have hanged him.”
- A jab at Balthazar's singing — if a dog howled like that it would be put down. It's the scene's one sour, comic note before the plot begins.
- “If she should make tender of her love, 'tis very possible he'll scorn it, for the man hath a contemptible spirit.”
- They say Benedick is too proud to accept Beatrice's love if she offered it, so he must be made to fall first — which is the whole reason they plant the story in his ear.
Theme
- Deception — Don Pedro and Leonato stage a fake conversation about Beatrice's love, counting on Benedick to overhear and believe it.
- Pride — Benedick's certainty that no woman could move him is what makes the trick so easy to set and so hard for him to resist.
What this chapter teaches
Teaching points
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A great line in its own right — why and how to use it“Nor I neither, but most wonderful that she should dote on Signior Benedick whom she hath in all outward behaviours seemed ever to abhor.”
Why it's great
The line piles disbelief onto contradiction until the outrageous rumor sounds like plain fact.
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It is most wonderful that he should quit without a word.
“There was never counterfeit of passion came so near the life of passion as she discovers it.”
Why it's great
A paradox makes a lie look truer than truth, which is exactly how a con works.
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literary
Use it yourself
I have never seen a put-on look so near the real thing.
“An' he had been a dog that should have howled thus, they'd have hanged him.”
Why it's great
By comparing the singer to a howling dog, the insult lands without ever naming him.
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Informal
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A dog barking like that would have woken the whole street.
“If she should make tender of her love, 'tis very possible he'll scorn it, for the man hath a contemptible spirit.”
Why it's great
It forecasts an outcome and then explains it away with a quiet character verdict.
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It is very possible he will turn the offer down flat.
Up next · 12paper bullets of the brainThe scene: Benedick Falls for BeatriceTakeaways
What you walk away with- A staged chat is a trap dressed up as gossip.
- Baiting a hook is a polite word for conning someone.
- Old oaths like by my troth make praise sound grand.
- Counterfeit feelings can look truer than real ones.
- The eavesdropper convicts himself with what he wants to hear.
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Questions, then the linesWhy do Don Pedro and Leonato pretend Beatrice loves Benedick?
Benedick swears he'll never marry, so direct persuasion won't work. By letting him 'overhear' that Beatrice is secretly pining for him, they let his own vanity do the work — and he starts falling for her on his own.
Does Benedick believe the trick right away?
Mostly. He doubts it once — "I should think this a trick, but that the grey-bearded fellow speaks it" — then decides that because Leonato, an older man, says it, it must be true.
Why does Claudio want Benedick gulled?
He's enjoying the sport. His aside "Bait the hook well. This fish will bite!" shows the whole thing is a game to him, and he's betting on Benedick's pride to take the bait.
What does "counterfeit of passion" mean?
A counterfeit is a fake, so "counterfeit of passion" is false feeling. Beatrice's allies insist that no fake love ever looked so much like the real thing.
What do they say about how Beatrice suffers?
They say she can't sleep, writes sheets of paper at night, kneels down, weeps and calls out "Oh, sweet Benedick!" — details meant to sound too specific to be invented.