patchy about a topic
Because I'm spotty on women's accessories.5 to 7 · 2014 — 第 9 / 10 章 · 4'07" · B2
Brian calls his editor at midnight for jewelry advice, then proposes to Arielle, who is already married. "Not just from 5 to 7," he insists - he wants the whole life, not the scheduled hours. She reminds him, "We had a trust that you have now broken."
At midnight, Brian phones his editor to ask where to buy Arielle jewelry, admitting he is spotty on women's accessories. Then he goes to Arielle and proposes, saying he does not want to be just her 5-to-7 companion. He gives her a ring that is not a conventional engagement ring, even though she is married.
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talk you off the ledgeOkie-dokieoverratedconquest of the marketplace
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calm someone from a crisis
Jane defines their bond as late-night panic calls where she talks him down from the edge.
I can talk you off the ledge if you call me tonight.
all right then
not as good as claimed
winning over the market
follow the rules
an exact amount in money
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patchy about a topic
Because I'm spotty on women's accessories.late at night
The kind where you call me in the middle of the night asking me crazy questions and I talk you off the ledge.calm someone from a crisis
Jane defines their bond as late-night panic calls where she talks him down from the edge.
The kind where you call me in the middle of the night asking me crazy questions and I talk you off the ledge.relative clause: The where-clause describes the kind of relationship, standing in for in which.
The kind where you call me in the middle of the night asking me crazy questions and I talk you off the ledge.Weak of and the blur into one light syllable after middle.
The kind where you call me in the middle of the night asking me crazy questions and I talk you off the ledge.an exact amount in money
Jane cuts through the vague talk and demands a dollar figure before naming a store.
Give me a dollar figure.tax included
$6000, including tax.all right then — A cutesy way to close a chat; too childish for formal use.
Okie-dokie, then.subjunctive wish: Wish plus were marks an unreal wish: it is not tomorrow at five yet.
I wish it were tomorrow at 5.Run wish it together and glide into were without a pause.
I wish it were tomorrow at 5.matter to a person
Brian says he wants to write stories that mean something to people, setting up the confession that follows.
And tell stories that mean something to people.the single thing
But the only thing...stay at someone's side
is to be the man who walks beside you.Link beside and you smoothly, almost 'by-side-ya'.
is to be the man who walks beside you.not merely
- You do walk beside me. - Not just from 5 to 7.be my spouse
Marry me, Arielle. I wanna be your husband.a standard engagement ring
And that's why this is not a conventional engagement ring.winning over the market
Brian jokes that a traditional ring would demand a full campaign through the market.
That and the fact that a conventional engagement ring will require a somewhat more robust conquest of the marketplace.not anymore
I do and I can no longer play by them.betray confidence
We had a trust that you have now broken.cannot stop myself
And I can't help it.share a whole life with
I've found the person I wanna spend my life with.a group of rules
That is a drive much stronger than any set of rules or any doubts about the meaning and purpose of marriage.as ... as comparison: As strong as mine compares the two feelings, with mine standing for my feelings.
Of course, if your... feelings aren't as strong as mine then... I completely understand.right from the start
From the first moment.quickly, rushed
You will be growing up in a very big hurry skipping your young adulthood.Everything here is about a bargain changing shape. The midnight call shows Brian treating his editor as a lifeline - "I talk you off the ledge" - even as he plans a gift for another woman. With Arielle, he stops bargaining and asks for the whole thing: "Marry me, Arielle. I wanna be your husband," he says, and "Not just from 5 to 7. It's not enough. Not nearly." The trap is that she already has a signed life. When she answers "I am already married," he shows he knew all along; what he is rejecting is the rule, not the fact. Her line - "We had a trust that you have now broken" - reframes his love as a breach, and "You know the rules" turns the affair into a contract he has violated.
Marry me, Arielle. I wanna be your husband.The proposal in one line: he asks her to marry him and names the role he wants, stepping out of the affair and into a life together.
- You do walk beside me. - Not just from 5 to 7.His refusal to stay inside the arrangement: walking beside her only during the set hours is not enough for him.
I've found the person I wanna spend my life with.His reason for breaking the rules: he says he has found the person he wants to share his whole life with.
It's not enough. Not nearly.His answer to the limited hours of the affair - the time they are allowed is far too little for what he wants.
Because he wants more than the 5-to-7 affair and believes love outweighs the arrangement. He says the drive to be with her is stronger than any rules or doubts about marriage.
The affair came with rules: fixed hours and no threat to her marriage. By proposing, he broke that understanding, which she calls a trust he has now broken.
He is flustered about buying Arielle jewelry and admits he is spotty on women's accessories, so he calls the person he trusts for late-night advice. She is his editor and his steadying friend.
Because Arielle is already married, so a standard engagement ring would be impossible. Brian gives what he can afford, acknowledging the situation with a wry joke.
She means the terms of their affair: the set 5-to-7 hours and the promise not to disturb her marriage. She is checking that he understood the deal before it goes any further.
次のチャプター · 第 10 章the salt of the EarthArielle's Farewell Letter
第 1 章worth havingBrian Meets Arielle in a Cafe
第 2 章culled from the subtextThe 5 to 7 Rule
第 3 章those are the rulesArielle Sets the Rules
第 4 章speak highly ofArielle's Husband Meets Brian
第 5 章able to affordBrian Dines With Valery's Friends
第 6 章Pardon my FrenchBrian's Parents Meet Arielle
第 7 章be afraid of being afraidBrian Teaches the Kids Baseball
第 8 章get your head rightBrian Reads His Story Aloud
再生中 · 第 9 章talk you off the ledgeBrian Proposes to Arielle
第 10 章the salt of the EarthArielle's Farewell Letter