“And if you're content, I'll do the rest.”
A quiet offer that respects the other's judgment while quietly claiming the work.
Formal
Capítulo 8 de 18 · 2'03"
The butler Molesley nervously shows the producer the scenes he has written to save the film, and describes a romantic ending of his own invention. Barber is moved almost to tears and tells him to finish the script: "please finish the script however you think best."
❝ Monólogo · 12 frases Molesley Pitches a Romantic Ending
On the set at Downton, the servant Joseph Molesley approaches the producer Jack Barber. He explains that he has gone through all the old dialogue cards and begun writing new scenes to cover the plot. Then he describes the ending he imagines, and Barber, delighted, asks him to complete the script his own way.
The scene belongs to Molesley, a servant who has spent the film hovering at the edge of the production, and who now turns out to be the best storyteller in the room. He is unsure of himself, stammering as he asks to speak with Barber, but the moment he is allowed to tell his ending he becomes fluent: "Then suddenly he lifts his face and sees Anne standing there, tall, serene, graceful, her eyes shining with unshed tears." What he has written is pure melodrama, and that is exactly why it works on the producer, who has been struggling to give the picture a finish. "I think I'm going to cry," someone says, and Barber hands him the job: "please finish the script however you think best." The quiet joke at the end is that nobody at the house knew the footman had this in him: "we weren't aware of his hidden talents."
A1–C2 es la escala MCER. Las tarjetas por encima del nivel elegido se atenúan y la reproducción no se pausa en ellas.
“And if you're content, I'll do the rest.”
A quiet offer that respects the other's judgment while quietly claiming the work.
Formal
“On an impulse, he snatches back his money.”
Impulse and action in one line: the thought, then the grab.
literary
“For instance, when she finally casts him off, might it not be better with a big romantic climax?”
A bold rewrite pitched as a polite question, complete with a romantic climax.
Formal
“Thank you for taking it on. I owe you a great deal.”
Gratitude with interest: thanks for taking the job, and a debt acknowledged.
Formal
“Her love, her beauty have saved him.”
Two gifts, one rescue: love and beauty share the credit in a single balanced line.
literary
Well, Bill Benson's about to throw away his life on the tables. Alone, hollow and without hope. Then suddenly he lifts his face and sees Anne standing there, tall, serene, graceful, her eyes shining with unshed tears. On an impulse, he snatches back his money. Rien ne va plus! The wheel spins. And every last thing he owns would have gone. But no. Her love, her beauty have saved him. She takes his hand, and they walk away. Together. The end.
Siguiente · 09trouble in paradiseLa escena: Mary Talks About Her MarriagesHe wants to show the scenes he has written and, if Barber approves, to write the rest of the script himself.
Instead of the woman simply leaving, he gives the gambler a grand romantic rescue in which her love saves him at the last moment.
The script was missing an ending, and Molesley's overwrought climax is exactly the emotional finish the producer needed to complete the picture.
It means to throw someone away or leave them behind. In his version, the woman casts the gambler off, which he wants to rewrite as a romantic finish.
He was a footman at Downton. The family did not know he had any writing talent until his scenes came to light.